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The Light on those Wings    

by Janine Acevedo











Wind rocks the pine tree
while ravens lift and settle
lift and settle on the branches
saying and saying.

The size of them, the heft
the sheen
the meat of them
as they lift and settle
lift and settle
saying, saying, saying.

The sky has that dark
gleam of more rain
to come
it’s cold.

Wind in the pine tree branches:
that sound
and how the tree moves.

Those ravens: rearranging off and on
saying, saying--
Suddenly they lift, tilt, veer:
the light on those wings
their heft, their sheen, their silence
gone

The pine still moving
as if breathing.



Photo Credit:
Shiro Kasamatsu - Pine Tree in Rain, Kinokunizaka, in Tokyo

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Janine Acevedo is filled with awe by the beauty in every day moments and can't help but write about them. She lives with her husband, daughter and dog in northern California. Being diagnosed with a chronic illness has made her slow down, and in doing do, she finds more and more at which to marvel.

 


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Anna Dillane
05/01/2012 9:32pm

just lovely...not sure I can ever look at ravens the same way again...but certain I don't want to..."the heft... of them"... I love it!

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Janine Acevedo
05/03/2012 3:07pm

Thank you so much.

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05/02/2012 3:08pm

Lovely, love the picture too.

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Janine Acevedo
05/03/2012 3:08pm

Thank you!

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Kaveri
05/03/2012 4:34pm

Janine, I could hear Mother Nature reciting this poem through you. Thank you.

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Janine Acevedo
05/04/2012 9:46pm

Thank you, Kaveri!

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Linda
05/05/2012 9:10pm

It was that kind of day here in SW lower Michigan & you describe it (though it was the crows that were saying. saying....) so exquisitely, Janine. Thank you for your sharing here!

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Janine Acevedo
05/23/2012 3:48pm

Thank you so much, Linda, I appreciate your kind words.

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05/21/2012 3:41pm

Janine,
Your words are music to my heart. I love how you invite us into a deeper experience of nature's brilliance and bounty. Your poetry is a gift!

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Janine Acevedo
05/23/2012 3:49pm

jan, thank you so much for your inspiring and thoughtful comment!

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